Monday, June 13, 2005

A Poet

i am a poet desperate
displaying my wishes, dreams, truths
through a torn garb for you to peep
through; see me through those holes
and see how the threads of my
imaginations colossal have draped themselves
loosely around me hoping to veil and
yet not

i'm a poet happy
knowing that you read me, my dear.
you, who i believe in.
you, to whom i surrender my all.
the joy that my words can create in your
heart - oh, i am a poet happy, my lord,
for i sing every word in quiet love
for you

i'm a poet fantastic
when i have the powers, faculties and desire
to pluck the stars of silence in my
milky soul and present them at your feet
as a humble gift, a sublime medium;
a cobbled pathway to the indefinite
journey of Discovery

i'm a poet so, so earnest
writing for the sake of my throbbing self
for it has a need to serve,
a need to tell
a need to give you another window
and it throbs everytime you are moved and want
to pick up the cards of choices i leave
to look beyond, within, without, around, at him and
at her

i'm a poet’s poet
i take every experience and that which is not
and paint you the story of a single life
at once yours
and
mine

11 comments:

. : A : . said...

Poets very often mirror our lives in their poems. Sometimes intentionally and sometimes not. But the beauty is that their writing is open to interpretation. I feel that a lot of great poems, may not have intended to have the same meaning that people take away from it. A poet has the ability to bring deeper thought to simple things and I think that you have captured that well in this post.

WISEGUY said...

Very well said and moving. The imagery is beautiful. I really like how you describe the revealing of secrets as a tear in your cover as well as a need to fulfill.

{illyria} said...

i love the way you gave life to your ego here. your voice is so clearly heard.

Adrian Neibauer said...

This is very Walt Whitman. Well written. I suggest you read "Song of Myself" so that you can see the similarities.

You do a wonderful job of representing a genre, labor, trait. Each adj., desperate, happy, fantastic, earnest, are all true to each and every writer who claims this sometimes lonely life. I know that sometimes we write for ourselves, but it is for the audience that we continue.

nothing said...

you have been book-tagged

keed said...

for you who is poet i salute you!

Anonymous said...

It is not fair that you write so, and I know nothing. :-)
"Odyssey" ripped me apart. Reading it was masochistic.
Some of the other lines in the two posts after that turned the rain outside my window purple.
:-)

Non-Sensei

aa said...

Sigh.

I loved your last lines:

"i'm a poet’s poet
i take every experience and that which is not
and paint you the story of a single life
at once yours
and
mine"

And so, I will end this post with another sigh.

Sigh.

:..M..: said...

.:A:. - Infact, I believe that the poet himself discovers new meanings to his own work. Making words at once shallow and dynamic.

WISEGUY - :) Always a quiet happiness when you comment on my work.

transience - *grin* Ah. You saw the ego.

stan laurel - If we do, indeed, continue for an audience, I'm afraid the words will soon run dry. If we, honestly, write for ourselves, the words re-appear like a threat.

kaashyapeya - I checked. I'm sorry, but I will not continue it in my blog. Thanks, nevertheless.

Billy - Thanks.

Non-Sensei - My blog was always open to you. :) I'm happy you've liked what I've written. Hopefully I shan't torment you so when we meet!

Free Spirit - Fellow poets would end it with a sigh, I suppose. You would understand best!

Sérgio Martins said...

nice, very nice. best luck.

:..M..: said...

smartins - Welcome and thanks.