Monday, August 22, 2005

Forgive Me

forgive me
for all the time
i passed up on,
for having chased
the useless point
and
for being stuck
in ego-emotions

forgive me
for gashing your
warm heart,
for raging through
these past years
and
for losing sight
of you

forgive me
for the times i felt
hatred toward you,
for wasting myself on
the unnecessary
and
for thinking i didn't
love you

forgive me.

8 comments:

bismuth said...

what was that? the complete opposite of your previous post!

keed said...

deep vibes.

Adrian Neibauer said...

This is very sad, but sweet. I hear some William Carlos Williams in here. Well done!

:-) said...

"for thinking i didn't
love you".... :-) ...you could have melted a rock.

:..M..: said...

Jax - Sweetness isn't the point.

bismuth - Hehe, you ought to check the dates. They're, afterall, well separated by the interim days.

Billy - Honest.

stan laurel - Thank you.

:-) - Ayyo. Don't say that, melting rocks mightn't forgive!

Anonymous said...

I've been stuck in my own ego-emotions for a while now. Seeing this, I wonder how I could stay away from reading your blog for so long. :)

Anonymous Poet said...

"forgive me
for gashing your
warm heart," . . . wow . . . there's a line. I hate arguments like that. But you capture the emotions so well. Thanks for sharing. You have captured something universal.

:..M..: said...

Anonymous - I think that was Kristian? Ego-emotions and wars are the worst, I've come to understand. I've now learnt how to somehow get past it and when I can't how to remain still.

Anonymous Poet - :) I'm glad you liked that. It's somewhat raw.