This poems leads to all sorts of interpretation. Who is that person? others might ask. Part of introspection is discovering the deep tapestries of your mind and understanding them. This is very well written. Probably my favorite in a while. Well Done!!
paddy - That'll apply to the person referred to in the poem.
stan laurel - :) Glad that you say it's a favorite in a while. I'd cherish that. Yes, there're levels to the poem - then again, there're levels to just about everything in the world. Although, the answer might be a ridiculously simple one.
CAROLVS - *grin* Good that you like it and it made you jump out of the background!!
deep poem. deep lingering sadness like mine. sigh. but i am not writing stuff too sad cos my ex still reads my blog and the last thing i want to do is be pathetic. been doing that enough haha. drop by my blog some time!
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this calls to mind hg wells.
HG, definitely.
Nice flow through the end. It is like one long word. Beautiful.
Jax - Ambiguous question, that.
transience - Oh no. Not him. I'm not extremely fond of his writing, however great.
mussolini - No!
.:A:. - :) Thanks.
exporing known but forgotten territories...
This poems leads to all sorts of interpretation. Who is that person? others might ask. Part of introspection is discovering the deep tapestries of your mind and understanding them. This is very well written. Probably my favorite in a while. Well Done!!
Fascinating! :) Short, and fascinating! :) I like it.
paddy - That'll apply to the person referred to in the poem.
stan laurel - :) Glad that you say it's a favorite in a while. I'd cherish that. Yes, there're levels to the poem - then again, there're levels to just about everything in the world. Although, the answer might be a ridiculously simple one.
CAROLVS - *grin* Good that you like it and it made you jump out of the background!!
Subtle and heavy at the same time. I like it. =)
deep poem. deep lingering sadness like mine. sigh. but i am not writing stuff too sad cos my ex still reads my blog and the last thing i want to do is be pathetic. been doing that enough haha. drop by my blog some time!
Free Spirit - :) Thanks.
Valerene - Welcome here. I hope that you'll be fine soon. Time's a great healer.
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